TikTok Novel Draft (updated 8/11)
Hey TikTokers, here is where I'm at with the draft. Feel free to drop any criticism you'd like! Part 1: The Proposal Brayden hadn’t considered the thorns. As he carried the plastic garbage bag outside, the thorns of forty-eight roses scraped his knee. A mere flesh wound is a small price to pay, he thought, for Madison to finally learn the inescapable nature of fate. When he had photoshopped the two of them together and posted it on Instagram for Secret Crush Day (a holiday he’d made up), she blocked him. When he later showed up to her soccer game wearing a replica jersey with her name and number, she had the coach ask him to take it off. When he made a video of himself singing his own rendition of “Greensleeves” and posted it to Youtube, he knew she didn’t watch it when he sent the link, because it never gained a view that didn’t come from when he clicked the link to check its views. Tomorrow would be different, he thought.Madison hadn’t been asked to homecoming yet,